In todays lesson, we peer assesed each work (those that had done moving image).
Here is the respone we got from our classmates about our sponership advert & the second advert we have filmed.
Sponership
-Need to consider ending it with a Title/Image of product
-The cheesyness of the advert links well with the theme
-The last shot could be cut shorter
Second Advert
-Some narration could be added
-'Oven shot' works well.
-Music fits well
-Title at the end is needed
-Contrast with the speed of Sadie moving fast and the slow clock looks good
We are going to take these points on board, in order to create a better peices of coursework.
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Sponsorship advert - Mid Level 2 - a great idea with appropriate music. Unfortunately it's apparent this was filmed at the last minute - your actors could have put more "oomph" into their acting and you need to cut the last shot of the girl laughing out.
ReplyDeleteAdvert - Mid Level 2 - your idea for this had many more scenes included and it would be great if you included some of them. A title is needed at the end showing the product. The music isn't a definite yes - it could be more contemporary like your sponsorship ad is.