Sponsorship advert - Mid Level 2 - a great idea with appropriate music. Unfortunately it's apparent this was filmed at the last minute - your actors could have put more "oomph" into their acting and you need to cut the last shot of the girl laughing out.
Advert - Mid Level 2 - your idea for this had many more scenes included and it would be great if you included some of them. A title is needed at the end showing the product. The music isn't a definite yes - it could be more contemporary like your sponsorship ad is.
In response to this feedback we are going to take on board the teachers pointers. We will most likely try and refilm some of the sponership adevert, and i will have a think over the next few days of how to imporve it. For the main advert they gave us feedback for, we have a scene to film and put in so that should be no problem. We may have to re consider the music, however this was a posotive point that the peers gave us about our advert (& in all fairness they are out target market not old teachers).
On tuesday we are going to re-film the first advert in the resturant udring the day time to get maxium use of light.
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